doomsday clock
the scent of rain
before the rain

 

6 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    __ As this was intended to do for all, I believe, you've energized a contrary thought in my sallow mind; 'flower clock.'
    _m

  2. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Love the tension in this.

    marion

  3. M. Shayne Bell Says:

    A dark but elegant haiku, with multiple levels of meaning. Excellent work!

  4. dvdoates Says:

    Nice work. It's unfortunate that this is more resonant these days.

  5. aniketnik Says:

    Everything is going to change from what it was to what it will be
    Change is inevitable
    However the perfect moment is not far away.

  6. Kraftivo Says:

    doomsday clock
    the scent of rain
    before the rain

    beautiful.

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