children’s voices –
the daisies in the vase
unwilt

 


5 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg I Says:

    Love the ‘unwilt’ imagery!

    loves me

    loves me not

    shredded daisies

  2. Jennifer Hambrick Says:

    Thank you, Mike. And I love your haiku … I can just see a pile of dismembered daisies (poor things).

  3. Bethany Says:

    What a lovely image and beautiful sensory language—I can see and hear it.

  4. Jennifer Hambrick Says:

    Thank you so much, Bethany!

  5. aniketnik Says:

    Wheter it's morning or evening children love to play together
    Since a long time the daisies were in the vase
    As of now it's time to replace the daisies from the vase.
    Whether the daisies were in the vase since last evening or they were placed in the vase in morning is an altogether different question.
    As of now the children are ready to go to play.
    Time flies.

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