on the kitchen table—
—Michael Dylan Welch
Issue 17.1 | 10 May 2017
Great haiku; shades of SE Asia!
the falling sun
burns the sand
Lots of intrigue in this one. I love how something so ordinary as a box on a kitchen table becomes a gateway for mystery. The unopened box and the foreign headlines provide the tension that leave us with a feeling of anxiousness. Nice Michael.
The box is actually opened (unpacked).
Interesting. It's like
A few things certain
A few ascertained
Life is all about present.
Intriguing, Michael. This felt like someone who has just arrived in a new environment where everything is strange.
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