remembrance day
 the gate clangs
  against its lock

 

 


5 Responses

  1. David Oates Says:

    Good take on a tough theme.

  2. Garry Says:

    white crosses arrayed
    in smart columns and rows
    the peace of the dead

  3. aniketnikhade Says:

    Very well defined, since each and every line speaks for itself.

  4. Simmons Says:

    Excellent!

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Great use of sound. The never-ending clanging made me think that nothing has changed and, like war, this sound will continue – like a death toll.

    marion

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