end of yoga
one of the corpses
lightly snoring

 

 

 

(Previously appeared in Yoga-ku, Ed. Terri French, 2014)

 


8 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg I Says:

    Liked your yoga haiku!

    sun and pool~~~
    water workout
    I grow younger

  2. Dave Borland Says:

    Excellent. Muy comprende'.
    A short, short story. So good,

  3. MaryJo Says:

    Liked the way you used the corpse pose.

  4. Peggy Bilbro Says:

    Perfect, Terri! I always hope I’m not one of the snorers!

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    Wonderful!

  6. aniketnikhade Says:

    One of the best thing to happen is the use of time and number. Time is represented by "end" and "lightly".

    Since a long time Yoga was going on and now it has ended.
    Lightly because earlier there was no pain, now the pain has started.

    Another interesting thing is the use of "numbers" that's made.

    One and corpses.

    One represents individual and corpses represents out of many.

    Short, simple, but absolutely interesting.

  7. Annette Makino Says:

    Thanks everyone for your kind and thoughtful comments!

  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Oh, this is delightful, Terri! :)

    marion

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