last one in
a moth enters through
the closing door



14 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Good to see you at tiny words! Enjoying your work in the Red Moon Press A New Resonance 10 anthology too!

    warm regards,

  2. Norman Darlington Says:

    Nicely observed. Lots of karumi here :)

  3. janewilliams Says:

    Lovely 'day's end' image. Thanks for inspiring the following :)

    first one out
    a mouse leaves through
    the cat flap

  4. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Such a satisfying "end of the issue" poem!

  5. aniketnikhade Says:

    An eye for detail. Absolutely interesting. Two different worlds and such an interesting change. Outside it's nature and inside it's a confinement even if the place is known.

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  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    This one made me smile – an opportunist moth. I imagined it slipping in through the doors of a closing pub/bar! :) :) :)


  9. magyar Says:

    Nicely posed, Dave. _m

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  12. syllable┬║17 Says:

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  13. H. F. Says:

    Sorry, but this haiku is a cliche, nothing original or poetic about it.

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