last one in
a moth enters through
the closing door

 

 


7 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Good to see you at tiny words! Enjoying your work in the Red Moon Press A New Resonance 10 anthology too!

    warm regards,
    Alan

  2. Norman Darlington Says:

    Nicely observed. Lots of karumi here :)

  3. janewilliams Says:

    Lovely 'day's end' image. Thanks for inspiring the following :)

    first one out
    a mouse leaves through
    the cat flap

  4. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Such a satisfying "end of the issue" poem!

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    This one made me smile – an opportunist moth. I imagined it slipping in through the doors of a closing pub/bar! :) :) :)

    marion

  6. magyar Says:

    Nicely posed, Dave. _m

  7. syllable┬║17 Says:

    nice one

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