Lovely image Bob. As we often think of foliage and other typical fall items, fountain coins are such a refreshing image. Sparkling away in autumn sun, it’s very magical.
Lovely image Bob. As we often think of foliage and other typical fall items, fountain coins are refreshing and unexpected. Sparkling away in autumn sun, it’s very magical.
September 26th, 2017 at 8:21 am
The backdrop of stars overflowing into the poem's space certainly makes you feel you are both seeing coins sparkle in the fountain, and beyond.
Great!
warm regards,
Alan
September 26th, 2017 at 8:33 am
With thanks,
The haze has risen
Glancing into the bird bath
Hundred stars float there
September 26th, 2017 at 10:17 am
Simply lovely, Bob.
September 26th, 2017 at 10:24 am
So well seen, Bob!
__ Too, I thank you for your generation this: it sees, but we may not see… it. _m
a cardinal
perched in the reddened leaves
it sees
September 26th, 2017 at 12:26 pm
Lovely, resonant, expansive haiku…
unplugged
fountain, splashing
jay
September 26th, 2017 at 1:51 pm
Birch trees dappled leaves
Tremble in Autumn's breeze
Shadows slant. Sharp. Bright
September 26th, 2017 at 6:08 pm
Lovely image Bob. As we often think of foliage and other typical fall items, fountain coins are such a refreshing image. Sparkling away in autumn sun, it’s very magical.
September 26th, 2017 at 6:10 pm
Lovely image Bob. As we often think of foliage and other typical fall items, fountain coins are refreshing and unexpected. Sparkling away in autumn sun, it’s very magical.
September 27th, 2017 at 12:15 am
Thanks to everyone for the kind words and the additional haiku.
October 22nd, 2017 at 11:06 am
This is a wonderfully uplifting haiku, Bob, especially when combined with your surname! :)
marion