Whenever I have been on a boardwalk, USA, Australia, or Britain, I've often wondered what has 'slipped' through. Does it all physically collect 'beneath' or into an alternative reality?
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down the sidewalk
an old vagrant
daisies in his mouth
Alan Summers
Publication credits: Hobo (Tasmania, 1999); Issa's Untidy Hut (2011)
October 5th, 2017 at 10:04 am
Wonderful!
October 5th, 2017 at 10:05 am
Lovely ku. Congratulations, Susan.
October 5th, 2017 at 12:43 pm
Very nice! Great line separation.
October 5th, 2017 at 2:44 pm
Thanks for the thumbs up, Pravat, Greg, and Mark. Glad you like this one.
October 5th, 2017 at 4:51 pm
The positive so well seen, Susan. Nifty!
… and that, that has fallen, can begin anew.
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October 5th, 2017 at 4:52 pm
Thanks, Susan. This works on many levels.
October 6th, 2017 at 2:16 pm
And there it was in front of you the whole time…A haiku!
Nicely done
October 6th, 2017 at 3:09 pm
Many thanks for your positive comments, Mary Jo, MIchelle, and Magyar. I appreciate them all!
Susan
October 22nd, 2017 at 10:51 am
Love the surprise of that last line, Susan! :)
marion
November 20th, 2017 at 4:36 am
Whenever I have been on a boardwalk, USA, Australia, or Britain, I've often wondered what has 'slipped' through. Does it all physically collect 'beneath' or into an alternative reality?
.
down the sidewalk
an old vagrant
daisies in his mouth
Alan Summers
Publication credits: Hobo (Tasmania, 1999); Issa's Untidy Hut (2011)
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May 7th, 2018 at 8:36 am
nice observation