moonrise
a bullfrog
greets the dog star


3 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    __ They'd not be singing were it not for the moon and stars. So nicely seen and felt Kathryn; heard at moonrise, my imaginations carried me onward. _m

    night chorus
    as crickets harmonize
    a far owl

  2. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Lovely sense of tranquillity in this, Kathryn.

    marion

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    moonrise
    a bullfrog
    greets the dog star

    —KATHRYN J. STEVENS
    .
    Great visual! And of course the sound then follows with that greeting!

    I like the three aspects:

    moonrise
    .
    a bullfrog
    .
    greets the dog star

    and

    moonrise
    .
    a bullfrog
    greets the dog star

    Making for a great two line phrase.

    .
    .

    the rhythm of rain
    a toad sleeps deep
    with her moon

    Alan Summers
    Brass Bell: a haiku journal
    Moon Haiku issue: Wednesday, October 1, 2014

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