our small fire
through a hole in the clouds
the only star

 

 


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  1. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    our small fire
    through a hole in the clouds
    the only star

    —RICK TARQUINIO

    Wonderful, and magical, seeing a space in the clouds where a star is shining through, even perhaps opened up by the camp fire and smoke. :-)

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    the camp fire burns the misty moon halved by thin cloud

    [monoku]

    Alan Summers
    "Stepping Stones:  a way into haiku" ed. Martin Lucas
    ISBN 978-0-9522397-9-6 (British Haiku Society 2007)
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  2. Rick Tarquinio Says:

    Thanks Alan. It was nice to see this poem in a new place. Hope you're well.

    Rick

  3. Satine Says:

    Brilliant

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