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8 Responses

1. Jennifer Hambrick Says:
   May 1st, 2018 at 9:26 am

   Lovely! I adore the music in "the crunch of frost." And I love the metaphorical "twinkling" of the frost on the bare branches.

2. Mark Dailey Says:
   May 1st, 2018 at 9:47 am

   Oooh–nice! A lovely haiku, with the word "alive" turning an already nice haiku into a reader's gasp of recognition and beauty.

3. Debbie Feller Says:
   May 1st, 2018 at 9:55 am

   Magical!

4. Magyar Says:
   May 1st, 2018 at 10:33 am

   See, hear, feel… the elements of this fine verse. Grandsome, Annette. _m

5. Annette Makino Says:
   May 1st, 2018 at 6:17 pm

   Thank you all so much for your thoughtful comments! It's great to know how a poem resonates with readers.

6. Anitha Varma Says:
   May 1st, 2018 at 10:45 pm

   Beautiful. :)

7. Pravat Says:
   May 1st, 2018 at 11:29 pm

   Lovely ku with an optimistic expression!

   barren branch
   the lone bird choruses
   with me

   Pravat Kumar Padhy
   Publication Credits: Chrysanthemum 10, October 2011

   *****
   naked tree
   the crows veil
   the darkness

   Pravat Kumar Padhy
   Publication Credit: Ginyu, No 53, January 2012

   *****
   autumn solitude–
   hope alights on
   bare branches

   Pravat Kumar Padhy
   Publication Credit: Daily Haiga, 2.4.2016

8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
   May 3rd, 2018 at 12:55 am

   Great use of the senses, Annette. This one sparkles! :)

   marion

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