the old blind cat
listens to the birds
morning brightness

 


7 Responses

  1. chief276 Says:

    A sense of everything in balance, all's right with the world, complicated by "blind", obviously, and by "old" and "morning," which remind us that a moment is a momentary thing.

    my neighbor's cat
    surveys the parking lot
    I need a new car

    Best, Bill Kenney

  2. Magyar Says:

    Nice response Bill_! In my shallow mind, a dog steps to the other side of the car..

  3. Anitha Varma Says:

    Too lovely for words! Thanks for sharing.

    Anitha.

  4. Pravat Says:

    Beautiful ku with a lot to express.

    singing bird–
    the blind man
    glimpses it

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Blog: Swimming in Lines of Haiku, July 2013

    the spider climbs
    up the corner edge
    on stepping stones
    the handicapped boy
    aims towards the starlit sky

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Ribbons Fall Issue, Vol. 9 No. 2 2013

  5. Magyar Says:

    Grand,Joan.
    __ I see that dear old blind cat's head… bobbing from side to side… its ears catching each bird's song. A different "Brightness." Nice.

  6. Susan Barry Schulz Says:

    Very nice. I keep re-reading this!

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Aw the old cat. Is he aware of the brightness even though he is blind. Certainly the birds will tell him its morning. Lovely.

    marion

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