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9 Responses

1. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
   May 30th, 2018 at 9:51 am

   Oh! This is very striking, Mark.

   marion

2. Mark E. Says:
   May 31st, 2018 at 10:05 am

   Thank you marion…

3. papagreenbean Says:
   May 30th, 2018 at 10:02 am

   Terrific—well done.

4. Mark E. Says:
   May 31st, 2018 at 10:06 am

   Thank you…

5. Pravat Says:
   May 30th, 2018 at 6:11 pm

   A splendid juxtaposition!

   full moon
   the women veils
   her scars

   Pravat Kumar Padhy
   Publication Credit: Brass Bell Haiku, October 2014

6. Mark E. Says:
   May 31st, 2018 at 10:06 am

   Thank you Pravat…
   Thank you Pravat…

7. Pravat Says:
   May 30th, 2018 at 11:18 pm

   A splendid juxtaposition!

   full moon
   the woman veils
   her scars

   Brass Bell Haiku, October 2014

8. Pravat Says:
   June 1st, 2018 at 9:59 pm

   Oh! There is typo. Please read 'women' as 'woman'

9. My Haiku Pond Says:
   June 3rd, 2018 at 9:18 am

   Wonderful and poignant senryu, Mark! It's also Today's Feature at MyHaikuPond.com :)

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