shrapnel scars
her fingers tracing
Orion

 


9 Responses

  1. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Oh! This is very striking, Mark.

    marion

  2. Mark E. Says:

    Thank you marion…

  3. papagreenbean Says:

    Terrific—well done.

  4. Mark E. Says:

    Thank you…

  5. Pravat Says:

    A splendid juxtaposition!

    full moon
    the women veils
    her scars

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Brass Bell Haiku, October 2014

  6. Mark E. Says:

    Thank you Pravat…
    Thank you Pravat…

  7. Pravat Says:

    A splendid juxtaposition!

    full moon
    the woman veils
    her scars

    Brass Bell Haiku, October 2014

  8. Pravat Says:

    Oh! There is typo. Please read 'women' as 'woman'

  9. My Haiku Pond Says:

    Wonderful and poignant senryu, Mark! It's also Today's Feature at MyHaikuPond.com :)

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