leaving no will the wind


7 Responses

  1. Lynne Rees Says:

    I like this so much, for its meaning/s and its form. A perfectly structured monostich haiku that manages to be full of poetry despite being only 5 words.

  2. tony Says:

    I like this

  3. rina Says:

    nice

  4. papagreenbean Says:

    Well played!

  5. Magyar Says:

    Will-o-the-wisp

    __ The reader's will, explores… so well seen, Jeffery; the small, builds all. _m

  6. Pravat Says:

    Nicely crafted. Concise and thoughtful poem.

    Eiffel tower–
    the wind bends
    the other way

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Frogpond, Winter Issue, 37:1, 2013

    wishing flags–
    the wind carries
    her emotion

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Whispers, 16 Sept 2016

    morning wind
    gently embraces me
    her tender voice
    from a distant, quite unknown,
    keeps me listening time and again

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Cattails, September 2016

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Well crafted.

    Que sera, sera…

    marion

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