bee tree
the emptiness within
slowly fills


4 Responses

  1. Marita Says:

    Very nice,
    I can hear the emptiness of the tree filling,
    but
    not my own.

  2. Autumn Says:

    I used to pass a big bee tree on the wood & wetlands trail at Cherry Creek. If I leaned against it, I could feel as well as hear the resonance.

    10,000 wings
    keeping the honey cool
    ommmmm

    Thank you for helping me recall the experience!

  3. Pravat Says:

    A haiku with great substances: karumi and ma.

    petals smile
    honey reaches hives
    bees muse

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication credits: The Poetry Pages, 3rd Feb 2010
    Lit. Org 25th June 2010;
    The Writer’s Literary Muse, Vol.1, Issue 1, June 2010

    beehives–
    long queue in front
    of blood bank

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Solace in nature. Very nice, Thom.

    marion

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