morning light
painting over
my painting

 

 

 

 

(Originally appeared in Modern Haiku 49.1)

 


5 Responses

  1. Gaby Bedetti Says:

    kinda meta

  2. Melinda Says:

    Lovely layers to this little poem. Is the artist painting over something revealed by the morning light, or is the light itself doing the over-painting. As an artist, I love where this takes me.

  3. Pravat Says:

    An interesting ku with layered images!

    window painting
    moon close to her shyness
    veiled in curtain

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Simply Haiku, Summer 2011, Vol. 9, No.3&4

  4. Adjei Agyei-Baah Says:

    new day surely bring new ideas to bare..its like one going over his haiku by turning text around to make the moment shine brighter.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    As an artist, I see this as renewed inspiration brought about by the arrival of a brand new morning. Lovely.

    marion

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