seeing my dentist of twenty years on the beach I recognize his eyes
—Sally Biggar
Issue 18.1 | 24 July 2018
Nice work. He probably recognizes your teeth. :)
So funny a haiku!
afternoon waves~~~ the falling sun shadows the sand
How fun your haiku. What David said is true I think. At a party, my dentist recognized my teeth when I smiled. Loved this one.
As I see above, Sally, a nifty tanka; that "on the beach" link… from one time, to another. _m
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July 24th, 2018 at 9:28 am
Nice work. He probably recognizes your teeth. :)
July 24th, 2018 at 10:02 am
So funny a haiku!
afternoon waves~~~
the falling sun
shadows the sand
July 24th, 2018 at 1:27 pm
How fun your haiku. What David said is true I think. At a party, my dentist recognized my teeth when I smiled. Loved this one.
July 28th, 2018 at 7:40 am
As I see above, Sally, a nifty tanka; that "on the beach" link… from one time, to another. _m