seeing my dentist
of twenty years
on the beach
I recognize
his eyes

 

 

 


4 Responses

  1. David Oates Says:

    Nice work. He probably recognizes your teeth. :)

  2. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    So funny a haiku!

    afternoon waves~~~
    the falling sun
    shadows the sand

  3. MaryJo Says:

    How fun your haiku. What David said is true I think. At a party, my dentist recognized my teeth when I smiled. Loved this one.

  4. Magyar Says:

    As I see above, Sally, a nifty tanka; that "on the beach" link… from one time, to another. _m

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