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12 Responses

1. Gaby Bedetti Says:
   October 15th, 2018 at 8:33 am

   chillingly clear

2. Susan Says:
   October 15th, 2018 at 2:40 pm

   Thank you, Gaby!

3. Rashmi Vesa Says:
   October 15th, 2018 at 9:21 am

   zig zag path—
   we talk of this and that
   except what we met for

4. Susan Says:
   October 15th, 2018 at 2:41 pm

   Ah, yes. The way we dodge difficult conversations, Rashmi. Thank you!

5. Theresa Says:
   October 15th, 2018 at 9:38 am

   Well said, Susan!

   Best,
   Theresa

6. Susan Says:
   October 15th, 2018 at 2:42 pm

   Many thanks, Theresa!

7. Dan Curtis Says:
   October 15th, 2018 at 10:48 am

   Love this one, Susan!

8. Susan Says:
   October 15th, 2018 at 2:40 pm

   Delighted to hear that, Dan. Thank you!

9. Lex Says:
   October 17th, 2018 at 1:54 pm

   Love the precision of the imagery, and how the poem stops right when the conversation does. Brilliant work.

10. Pravat Kumar Padhy Says:
    October 25th, 2018 at 11:45 pm

    Beautiful ku filled with many layers of image and interpretation.

    rock surface –
    she hardens her
    point of view

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    *
    površina stijene –
    ona uvrš?uje svoje
    gledište

    ?asopis za haiku / Haiku Magazine IRIS International No. 2, 2016
    *
    tiny pebbles
    the softness
    of her talk

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Runners Up, Iafor Vladimir Devide Haiku Award, 2017

    baby talk
    I silently watch
    blooming buds

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    The 9th Yamadera Bash? Memorial Museum English Haiku Contest, 2017

11. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
    October 29th, 2018 at 3:55 am

    You nailed it, Susan! Love this one.

    marion

12. martin1223 Says:
    March 14th, 2019 at 12:17 am

    between the pine snake’s hiss…
    me

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