so cold
two dogs and the cat
together at the fire


—Amanda Burton
        

About the author: Amanda Burton, thedarkheart at hotmail.com.

Responses to the haiku for 16 January 2001 by Amanda Burton

  1.  
    conny (conny at tiscali dot es)
    2003-03-05 10:33:15
     

    lovely haiku, wish I could do one

  2.  
    Ambre'
    2003-04-23 12:53:28
     

    Great Haiku, gave ame great inspration to wrtie Haikus!!!!!

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-09-05 19:46:55
     

    i love a good pun, amanda.

    however, (my pet word), someone reminded me of something; lately, even i had failed to observe, from time to time.

    indefinite articles and definite article, usually i am not particular about such issues, though now, it has been positioned uppermost in my cranium, almost akin to someone telling you not to think of something, and you find yourself doing the opposite, and that is all you can think of.


    so cold
    two dogs and a cat, together...
    at a fire


    i like the "at" on the third line, to me it gives tremendous emphasis on (how cold)

    after i finish here, i will go in search of more pieces arising from you.

    thanks for sharing

  4.  
    Amanda Burton
    2003-10-29 22:37:55
     

    orgbob
    bless his heart;
    cyber graffiti
    Who knew?

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-30 07:22:30
     

    "amanda"


    amanda
    here i lurk
    to think ...
    you read my work

    amanda
    stray from the beaten path
    even now ...
    you bare a laugh

    amanda
    from what we learn
    is it of concern ...
    now it's your turn

  6.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-05 02:33:19
     

    tokyo winter apartment
    warming up my feet
    in a cold blanket

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-03 21:02:51
     

    nose dripping -
    brisk winds
    chill the campfire

    -

    wondering how amanda is doing these days ...

  8.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-04 22:45:35
     

    At the fire side
    two dogs seepling a dogsleep
    and a cat purring

  9.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-11-06 20:11:04
     

    rainy autumn night -
    full bloom bougainvilleas
    some red, some purple

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