At the cliff face
my wandering ends,
the raven's begins


—Noor Khalsa
        

About the author: Noor Khalsa, KHALSANS at nv.doe.gov

About the author: I live in a sikh community in Espanola, New Mexico. I'm an engineer, a yoga instructor, a student of martial arts, and I'm currently working on getting my class A skydiving license.

 

Responses to the haiku for 1 March 2001 by Noor Khalsa

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-09-15 22:26:46
     

    noor, nicely done, however, for the "cliff's face".

    the thought reaching out for me said, "cliff and face" are one and the same, though cliff is defined as, "the steep and rugged (face) of a rocky mass"

    what would you say to:

    edge of the cliff___
    my wondering ends
    the raven's begins

    still a nice thought, you presented, noor

    i would delve into this, but there's a muttering of "leap, leap, leap, bob".

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-23 05:50:52
     

    over the cliff
    a skeletal tree
    hangs on to life

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-07 16:42:04
     

    edge of night
    life's completion, day closer ...
    the nightwatchman clocks in

    -

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