The landscape is halved
    fog slumps across the valley
 carrying the night


—Audaye Elesedy
        

About the author: audaye elesedy, a-elesedy at tinyworld dot co dot uk

 

Responses to the haiku for 2 March 2001 by Audaye Elesedy

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-19 00:49:56
     

    tinsels ...
    cool autumn morn
    green fronds reflecting sunlight

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-23 05:52:16
     

    impending storm
    the clouds
    hide the stars and moon

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-08 18:59:24
     

    today's burden
    weights upon my shoulders ...
    i slump across the bed

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