sun pushes through mist
tai chi dancers move as one
morning in shanghai


—Steve Smith

About the author: Steve Smith, dragon at direct dot ca
Vancouver, Canada

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Responses to the haiku for 6 March 2001 by Steve Smith

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-19 00:45:06
     

    autumn showers ///

    pedestrians run for cover
    flying debris

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-23 05:57:43
     

    up and down, up and down
    three little birds flying
    over the field

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-08 19:19:41
     

    morning in miami
    traffic flows as one ...
    ambulance wails

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