The fog rises up
ghostlike from the lake surface--
Winter surrenders.


—Lauren Chiasson

About the author: Lauren Chiasson, LaurenCpoet at aol dot com

Lauren Chiasson
Barefootpoet
Detroit born and raised
gypsy soul, travels on the wings of the wind
listens to its voices

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Responses to the haiku for 7 March 2001 by Lauren Chiasson

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-09-22 19:47:49
     

    solitary star
    one alone-
    conversing with the wind

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-23 07:57:03
     

    countryside dinner
    scent of burnt soil
    for rice season

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-08 19:27:19
     

    storks in flight
    white caps upon the lake ...
    threatening tropical breeze

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