cloud break 
the smooth shadow
of a cactus


—paul m.
        

About the author: paul m. is an award winning haiku poet whose work has been widely published. He is Treasurer for the Haiku Society of America (hsa-haiku.org) and Haiku North America (haikunorthamerica.com), as well as book review editor for Modern Haiku (modernhaiku.org).

Contact: pauldmiller at fctvplus dot net

 

Responses to the haiku for 15 March 2001 by paul m.

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-19 00:19:56
     

    clouds
    broken ---
    rain comes through window

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-23 08:07:24
     

    moonlight
    the rose etched
    by its shadows

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-10 05:08:06
     

    spring breeze
    birds sing in harmony ...
    unseen

    -

  4.  
    buddy cage
    2005-06-19 16:11:16
     

    ah yes the cactus & the magic cactus.


    pastel sunset
    the changing shades
    of a peyote cactus

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-08-11 13:53:11
     

    looming in the shadows--
    the shadow
    of this winter wren

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