two white puffs playing
my warm Shi Tzus in the snow
while my feet get cold


—Tom Murray
        

This haiku was written just a few days ago, during the last snow fall of the season---I hope---but the dogs don't.

About the author: Tom Murray, thmurray at impop.bellatlantic.net
Arlington Va

About the author: Former USG employee -- served several tours in the Orient. Now retired and working as an executive in the private sector. Learning to love haiku and appreciate its challenges.

 

Responses to the haiku for 22 March 2001 by Tom Murray

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-19 00:09:49
     

    one brown puff
    basket of stuffed animals ...
    small terrier sleeps

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-23 08:16:39
     

    fake antiques
    the fresh signature of time
    on the porcelain

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-10 18:49:39
     

    two opaque puffs --
    my warm thoughts
    stare into the fireplace

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