the park bench
covered in snow-
quietly waiting


—Charles Reed

written during a afternoon walk following the nor'easterner snowstorm which blew in (early March, 2001)

About the author: Charles Reed, lucien at cboss.com

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Responses to the haiku for 30 March 2001 by Charles Reed

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-18 17:40:05
     

    heavy snowfall -
    upon returning home
    the end of my journey

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-23 08:26:42
     

    garden talk
    the silence punctuates
    our disagreement

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-11 16:37:19
     

    desolate beach
    covered with litter ...
    homeless feline

    -

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-11-24 00:37:37
     

    Between the park's gate
    and the snowed bench, a new path...
    waiting the lover

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-08-12 14:36:01
     

    dog days night
    cross brooding waters
    the moon shines, elsewhere

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