The black reservoir:
a string of taillights circling
around the pale moon.


—d. f. tweney
        

About the author: d. f. tweney (dft at tinywords dot com) is the publisher and chief haikuvangelist of tinywords.com. A technology journalist, he has also worked as a weed whacker, pizza chef, ESL teacher, and environmental activist, and he won the Boston Poetry Slam in 1992. He is secretly Canadian.

 

Responses to the haiku for 2 April 2001 by d. f. tweney

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-09-24 05:45:05
     

    summer on the lake-
    a stone is thrown
    ring after ring, is drawn

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-23 08:28:24
     

    light waves
    the full moon
    dances in the sea

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-11 20:44:21
     

    glistening waters:
    waxing moon,
    struggles to stay aloft

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