Broken clouds
 reveal a full moon,
 silver cactus thorns.


—Larry Hammer

About the author: Larry Hammer, lnh at primenet dot com or lnh at dm.net

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Responses to the haiku for 9 April 2001 by Larry Hammer

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-17 08:15:19
     

    full moon, midday
    only cloud in the sky ...
    rain prediction

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-23 08:48:00
     

    droplets from leaves
    the moon dances
    in the pool

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-11 21:17:29
     

    dove, rooftop's edge,
    leaps high into the sky -
    my feet earthbound

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