afloat in the sky
a thousand brown plane tree leaves
crocus in flower


—Jennifer Rumsey
        

About the author: Jennifer Rumsey
Sydney, NSW, Australia
jrumsey at optusnet.com.au

 

Responses to the haiku for 8 June 2001 by Jennifer Rumsey

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-09-26 07:45:30
     

    brightly colored rubber bag
    a balloon in flight-
    the tree limb, now, held

  2.  
    Narayanan (mahashishta at hotmail dot com)
    2003-12-29 05:17:16
     

    sparrows flutter
    through falling leaves
    in crystal music ~

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-13 06:55:52
     

    stranded on the ground
    mockingbird fledgling ...
    no flight feathers in sight

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