wind debates with wind
shingles fly away in haste
the argument ends


—Steve Blum

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    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-09-27 07:52:41
     

    the wind~ ~ ~
    gently across my cheek
    her touch


    an excerpt:


    some join hands
    some share thoughts
    some apart, are joined by the heart

    ...

    where does the wind go
    is it impossible to follow
    let's wait, for here it comes again

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