feeding the koi-
the soft ripples spread
the sunset


—Noor Khalsa
        

About the author: Noor Khalsa, KHALSANS at nv.doe.gov

About the author: I live in a sikh community in Espanola, New Mexico. I'm an engineer, a yoga instructor, a student of martial arts, and I'm currently working on getting my class A skydiving license.

 

Responses to the haiku for 20 June 2001 by Noor Khalsa

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-14 21:50:21
     

    gentle koi rainbows
    swim by ...
    shallow pond

  2.  
    Narayanan Raghunathan
    2004-02-07 06:07:01
     

    Thanks Noor Khalsa.

    koi flutter fins
    dissolve sun in water~
    sky etches all again

    spectral koi dance
    in twilight breeze
    effacing landscapes

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-13 19:32:11
     

    feeding blue jays' wings
    spring morning breeze ...
    brush my face

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