turning
our backs to the fire
silent night


—M. Gordon
        

About the author: M. Gordon is an English teacher in Glendale, AZ.
Her poems have most recently been published in Modern
Haiku, The Heron's Nest, and bottle rockets.

 

Responses to the haiku for 31 July 2001 by M. Gordon

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-11 08:01:25
     

    fiery argument
    she turns her back ...
    silence

  2.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-12-06 05:43:06
     

    Camp-fire-
    the shadow of a pine
    just on the moon

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-06 14:16:24
     

    vasile,

    "impossible as being the truth"

    forgive my tinkering ...

    ha, forgive me again, as i read your haiku for the fifth time, it all fell into place


    i appreciate your effort

    very good, at least for me

  4.  
    Colin
    2008-05-04 01:59:27
     

    A haiku? Why waste your time?

  5.  
    b.m.r.
    2008-12-03 10:18:23
     

    dreary, chilly day-
    waddling lackluster duck
    mimics the clouds

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