half a moon
pasted on the blue
morning sky


—d. f. tweney

This haiku is featured in "A Procession of Ripples," a 2006 anthology of haiku and photos assembled by Laryalee Fraser.

About the author: d. f. tweney (dft at tinywords dot com) is the publisher and chief haikuvangelist of tinywords.com. A technology journalist, he has also worked as a weed whacker, pizza chef, ESL teacher, and environmental activist, and he won the Boston Poetry Slam in 1992. He is secretly Canadian.

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Responses to the haiku for 13 August 2001 by d. f. tweney

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-09-29 21:39:56
     

    cookie cutters-
    so many stars
    by design

  2.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-05-07 02:50:04
     

    Clear sky -
    the half moon and the whole sun
    on the same way

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-16 09:38:20
     

    traveling all night
    dawn for the past two hours -
    where's the sun

  4.  
    levon machenry
    2005-05-26 19:03:07
     

    mr. tweeny you run a damn fine website.
    entertaining and enriching. down here
    in cotton country we all have spawned some
    damned good writers and we appreciate
    good writing. plenty of it to be found
    here!
    levon


    Natchez dawn
    the steam risin'
    from a pan of cornbread

  5.  
    b.m.r.
    2008-12-08 16:18:15
     

    autumn, quarter moon
    benighted, venus on the rise

  6.  
    Alan Summers
    2009-08-21 07:53:07
     

    Enjoyed the haiku Dylan! ;-)

    Alan
    www.withwords.org.uk

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