The moonlit river:
Its silver surface broken
by a salmon's splash.

—d. f. tweney
        

About the author: d. f. tweney (dft at tinywords dot com) is the publisher and chief haikuvangelist of tinywords.com. A technology journalist, he has also worked as a weed whacker, pizza chef, ESL teacher, and environmental activist, and he won the Boston Poetry Slam in 1992. He is secretly Canadian.

Responses to the haiku for 10 September 2001 by d. f. tweney

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-09 06:17:14
     

    blacktop ___
    evenly broken yellow line
    endless road

  2.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-05-09 02:17:08
     

    Clearing night -
    challenged by the salmon
    the moon is bathing

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-23 13:39:17
     

    trash
    in the grass, along the road --

    solitary purple blossom
    -

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