haloed moon -
in the dark field water spills
from a silver pipe


—Harold Bowes
        

About the author: Harold Bowes has been published in several haiku journals, both electronic and paper, and has appeared in the Red Moon Anthology. He edits Alba, an ezine emphasizing short poetry.

Write to him at heb at oregontrail.net.

Responses to the haiku for 24 September 2001 by Harold Bowes

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-08 06:33:24
     

    opaque moon
    in her darken room ...
    the falling of tears

  2.  
    levon machenry
    2005-06-28 19:52:46
     

    great haiku harold. like that the piece
    isn't the usual haiku fare. respect a man
    who notices things like water flowing
    from a silver pipe in a field. 'nuff said!


    winter wind
    someone up the street
    is baking bread

  3.  
    b.m.r.
    2008-12-16 18:37:43
     

    labouring harvest moon--
    cross this vast field
    one green corn stalk

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