so cold
excited dog drags me reluctantly
out for a walk


—Elena Sherman
        

About the author: Elena Sherman, hephzibah at mindspring dot com

Responses to the haiku for 10 December 2001 by Elena Sherman

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-06 19:31:19
     

    so cold -
    the tip of his's nose drips
    but no icicles

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-05 23:43:59
     

    good morning
    pet dog whistles and nudges nose
    against me to wake me up

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-23 20:32:31
     

    mumbling
    beginning of a new day -

    grub on single strand web

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