Fine chill grey rain
On shoppers rushing past-
Inside, we are warm.


—Pete Hoyle
        

Here in Virginia we get little snow, so my image of Christmas shopping is not the traditional scene. Still, it works. I hope the haiku gives the idea.

About the author: Pete Hoyle, Williamsburg, Va.
sphoyl at wm dot edu

Responses to the haiku for 11 December 2001 by Pete Hoyle

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-05 07:42:53
     

    mundane gray day
    carolers singing ...
    the joys of the season

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-05 23:42:27
     

    lonely winter
    the discomforting warmth as i
    watch a couple hug

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-23 20:52:40
     

    brushing against my skin
    cool night air -

    silent dance of the leaves

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