dead 
on the Christmas tree 
  a dragonfly 


—Ross Clark
        

About the author: Ross Clark
Brisbane, Australia
rclarkbard at yahoo dot com dot au

Responses to the haiku for 14 January 2002 by Ross Clark

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-08 06:43:07
     

    tears flow-
    pine needles fall no more
    epithet for the once mighty

  2.  
    myron
    2003-11-22 23:55:37
     

    i like this image - it would have taken a lot of looking to see the insect amongst all those decorations...

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-24 18:40:29
     

    the thought of a "lot of looking"; perhaps a chance viewing, as most things in life we stumble across

    -

    alive
    cross the window
    cripple fly

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