holding our daughter
up to her first plum blossoms --
petals in her hand


—d. f. tweney
        

About the author: d. f. tweney (dft at tinywords dot com) is the publisher and chief haikuvangelist of tinywords.com. A technology journalist, he has also worked as a weed whacker, pizza chef, ESL teacher, and environmental activist, and he won the Boston Poetry Slam in 1992. He is secretly Canadian.

 

Responses to the haiku for 5 April 2002 by d. f. tweney

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    D. F. Tweney (dft at tinywords dot com)
    2003-03-11 01:35:41
     

    Last spring, I was honored to see this haiku included in one of Ray Rasmussen's wonderful collections of photographs and haiku -- an album of spring haiku.

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-11-27 09:15:52
     

    new blossom of the season:
    holding my first-born
    for the first time

  3.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-05-09 02:29:45
     

    A simply breath of wind-
    in the empty hand the coolness
    of plum blossom

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-25 18:14:42
     

    my daughter's soft hand
    my winter perceived ...

    chapel bells ring

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