lovemaking after midnight   sirens in the distance


—Ross Clark

About the author: Ross Clark
Brisbane, Australia
rclarkbard at yahoo dot com dot au

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published 14 June 2002
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  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-04-07 22:58:10
     

    a really good piece, ross.
    a little more sentence structure would have only helped. perhaps, it was a transference of your computer. in any case...

    case in point:

    love making...
    after midnight, sirens
    in the distance

    ross, you have done something, many struggle daily to accomplish, and you made it look easy.

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