up from behind
the Seven-11 sign -
August moon


—Penelope Davis Greenwell
        

About the author: Penelope Davis Greenwell, io63 at ix.netcom.com

Penelope Davis Greenwell's work has appeared on Internet haiku zines such as Heron's Nest and Poetry in the Light, and in print zines such as Modern Haiku, still, Tundra, Lynx, and others.

 

Responses to the haiku for 1 August 2002 by Penelope Davis Greenwell

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-11-15 04:28:12
     

    lingering moon
    lazy autumn afternoon ...
    rather opaque

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-04-19 07:47:46
     

    celebrating
    autumn festival at sea
    two moons greet our dinner

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-29 18:24:54
     

    in vain
    sign's neon light ...
    aging firefly's erratic flight

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