summer wind --
dry grasses flowing one hill
into another


—Yvonne Cabalona

About the author: Yvonne Cabalona
Modesto, California
YCabalona at sylvan.k12.ca.us

Member of the Central Valley Haiku Club, based in Sacramento, CA. Other haiku published in "The Heron's Nest", Haiku Society of America's 2001 Anthology, "Modern Haiku", and HSA's upcoming publication of "Frog Pond."

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Responses to the haiku for 9 August 2002 by Yvonne Cabalona

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-11-15 03:55:32
     

    statued stork
    unsuspecting meal ...
    the wind picks up

  2.  
    Alan Summers
    2009-05-30 08:00:38
     

    Gently evocative, nice allusion to Basho too.

    all my best,

    Alan
    www.withwords.org.uk

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