torn blue recycle bag:
the ants trail
in and out

—Patricia Kelly

About the author: Patricia has a weblog that contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at roswila at gmail dot com.

Responses to the haiku for 23 October 2002 by Patricia Kelly

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-24 07:09:25

    ant trail:
    late evening commuter traffic
    crawls to and fro

    Patricia Kelly (patriciagrace at yahoo dot com)
    2003-10-24 13:19:55

    Ah, thanks for your response, Bob. I can just see yours. Together these two show the "micro" and "macro" views. :-)

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-27 20:38:56

    ahh yes, patricia, you do have a way with words.

    life does concern the big and small of it all

    i thank you for your inspirational words