After the argument -
quiet
when I walk in the room.


—Jon Summers

About the author: Jon Summers lives in South Wales, and has had haiku published in a variety of magazines including Blithe Spirit, Presence and Fire. He lives with his wife, a rapidly growing son, and an ever-shrinking amount of time to actually get any writing done!

email: SummersJ at logica.com

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Responses to the haiku for 21 November 2002 by Jon Summers

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-10-27 21:00:47
     

    a kiss -
    an audible sigh
    silence

  2.  
    myron lysenko
    2003-11-20 22:35:28
     

    ah yes, & what a terribly loud silence it is! i liked reading this...& i like the way you've put "quiet" on its own in line two - implying loneliness...

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-30 07:29:00
     

    before an argument
    she drops the flowers --
    i left the room

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