4:30PM -
frost, still,
on the pavement.


—Jon Summers
        

About the author: Jon Summers lives in South Wales, and has had haiku published in a variety of magazines including Blithe Spirit, Presence and Fire. He lives with his wife, a rapidly growing son, and an ever-shrinking amount of time to actually get any writing done!

email: SummersJ at logica.com

Responses to the haiku for 17 January 2003 by Jon Summers

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-24 18:01:04
     

    midnight -
    homeless man
    still beneath the bridge

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-03 10:46:10
     

    past two a.m.
    still trying to get
    into dreamland

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-30 16:25:09
     

    humid
    7:13 post meridiem ...
    heaviness in the air

    -

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-21 00:58:51
     

    Fresh traces -
    the wedding travel of
    the vagrant dogs

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-31 10:04:47
     

    dreary afternoon
    beneath grey cloud
    my shadow forgotten, somewhere

    -

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