the red balloon
begins to sink
last call


—Barry Goodmann
        

About the author: Barry Goodmann (bgoodmann at aol.com) is a poet, writer and editor who lives in the New York metropolitan area. He has published poetry on several websites and in various literary magazines.

Responses to the haiku for 28 January 2003 by Barry Goodmann

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-25 09:46:14
     

    wasn't that a ball!!!

    party favors
    on the floor

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-02-03 09:48:16
     

    gently resting
    on the cemetery
    happy retirement balloons

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-01 19:11:58
     

    cherry blossoms
    on the bosom of mother earth ...
    fallen samurai


    -


    raging waters
    how they flow --
    through forest and time


    -


    death's embrace
    the ways of this world ...
    the fallen oak tree

    -

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-21 01:02:02
     

    Red bands waving
    at the mercy of the wind
    a child 's eyes full of tears

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-31 15:53:52
     

    ball
    in it's ascent --
    already the new year in australasia

    -

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