side street
after the train departs--
silence


—d. f. tweney
        

About the author: d. f. tweney (dft at tinywords dot com) is the publisher and chief haikuvangelist of tinywords.com. A technology journalist, he has also worked as a weed whacker, pizza chef, ESL teacher, and environmental activist, and he won the Boston Poetry Slam in 1992. He is secretly Canadian.

Responses to the haiku for 4 February 2003 by d. f. tweney

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-25 10:09:36
     

    distant train whistle
    in the silence, her voice ...
    long walk home

  2.  
    Narayanan Raghunathan (mahashishta at hotmail dot com)
    2004-01-08 03:13:43
     

    Great Thanks Tweney and Bob for your Haiku ~
    It reminded me of this.

    railway station ~
    in the cacophony
    an old love song

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-03 09:42:17
     

    bus station trees
    returning birds chatter
    louder than us

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-01 19:55:29
     

    in silence --
    empty streets, sunday morning
    vendor sorts papers

    -

  5.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-22 00:15:42
     

    Sleepless night -
    at the last storey
    a lighted window

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-31 16:47:39
     

    distant terminal
    through barren pines ...
    new year, one stop away

    -

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