icy river
for a short time caught
in silence


—darja kocjancic
        

About the author: darja kocjancic
slovenija, europa

darjahai at hotmail.com

Responses to the haiku for 7 February 2003 by darja kocjancic

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-26 06:43:57
     

    river bed litter
    pristine opaque blanket ...
    now covers

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-02-03 09:35:51
     

    frozen stream
    shortcut
    for home

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-02 13:46:33
     

    all horns silent
    traffic at a standstill --
    mother and ducklings cross road

    -

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2004-07-21 01:08:46
     

    A haze column rises
    above the ice-hole
    the angler's dog waiting

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-31 16:59:17
     

    caught in
    chilling rain --
    thoughts of home

    -

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