a driving wind--
the stop signs
all flattened

—J. D. Heskin

About the author: J.D. Heskin
Duluth, MN

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Responses to the haiku for 30 May 2003 by J. D. Heskin

    S. Sullivan
    2003-05-31 04:37:11

    Very nice, the 'driving'wind, the 'stop signs'flattened. Beautifully contrasted.

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-06-03 23:45:27

    i can see the humor in j.d.'s words

    a "driving" wind--

    followed by "the stop signs"

    even "all flattened", i could perceive.
    "however", the feeling left within me was this was more than a moment.

    hmmm, what about:

    driving wind---
    stop signs give way

    less at times, best...

    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-01-04 08:20:44

    heavy rain
    the kitten
    between cat's forelegs

    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-21 18:52:07

    blistering sun -
    the umbrella's leaves
    remain green