a driving wind--
the stop signs
all flattened


—J. D. Heskin
        

About the author: J.D. Heskin
Duluth, MN

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Responses to the haiku for 30 May 2003 by J. D. Heskin

  1.  
    S. Sullivan
    2003-05-31 04:37:11
     

    Very nice, the 'driving'wind, the 'stop signs'flattened. Beautifully contrasted.

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-06-03 23:45:27
     

    i can see the humor in j.d.'s words

    a "driving" wind--

    followed by "the stop signs"



    even "all flattened", i could perceive.
    "however", the feeling left within me was this was more than a moment.

    hmmm, what about:

    driving wind---
    stop signs give way
    flattened


    less at times, best...

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-01-04 08:20:44
     

    heavy rain
    the kitten
    between cat's forelegs

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-06-21 18:52:07
     

    blistering sun -
    the umbrella's leaves
    remain green

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